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Intrusion (Part 2)

  • Writer: Nick Ho
    Nick Ho
  • Oct 17, 2024
  • 1 min read

Updated: Jan 27

The robot Mia flying over a glowing cityscape, with a planet and clouds in the background. Blue and metallic tones dominate the scene.
"So… this is goodbye?"

Old Man: He’s like a son to me. And you... you’re like a daughter.


You: I’ll bring him back. We’ll come home together.


Old Man: But this shield—it’s too strong.


(Your eyes narrowing, scanning the shield intently. Then, with a sharp, sudden motion, you point towards a small gap shimmering in the energy field.)


You: There—look! The gap! Just big enough to slip through.


(Your finger hovers over the shield, a faint gap flickering with vulnerability. In that brief moment, it pulses with hope, urging you to act before it disappears.)


Old Man: It’s... it's too small.


You: It’s enough.


Old Man: So… this is goodbye?


You: (turns to face him) Not goodbye. You’ve watched over me all these years. Now, it’s my turn to save him.


Old Man: Take care, Mía. And good luck.


(With one last, lingering glance at him, you step to the edge. Your heart races, but your resolve is unshakable. Without a second thought, you leap into the unknown.)


(Posted on Threads on 15.10.2024)


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