Intrusion (Part 2)
- Nick Ho
- Oct 17, 2024
- 1 min read
Updated: Jan 27

Old Man: He’s like a son to me. And you... you’re like a daughter.
You: I’ll bring him back. We’ll come home together.
Old Man: But this shield—it’s too strong.
(Your eyes narrowing, scanning the shield intently. Then, with a sharp, sudden motion, you point towards a small gap shimmering in the energy field.)
You: There—look! The gap! Just big enough to slip through.
(Your finger hovers over the shield, a faint gap flickering with vulnerability. In that brief moment, it pulses with hope, urging you to act before it disappears.)
Old Man: It’s... it's too small.
You: It’s enough.
Old Man: So… this is goodbye?
You: (turns to face him) Not goodbye. You’ve watched over me all these years. Now, it’s my turn to save him.
Old Man: Take care, Mía. And good luck.
(With one last, lingering glance at him, you step to the edge. Your heart races, but your resolve is unshakable. Without a second thought, you leap into the unknown.)
(Posted on Threads on 15.10.2024)
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