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The Control Room (Part 2)

  • Writer: Nick Ho
    Nick Ho
  • Oct 31, 2024
  • 1 min read

Updated: Jan 27

Commander stands confidently before futuristic screens displaying data, with a serious expression. Background is high-tech and blue-toned.
"Captain, you’re dismissed."

You: So we’re supposed to wait? Just trust they’ll find him?


Ed: Jun, patience.


Commander: Your duties are here. That’s all.


You: Then you’re making a big mistake!


Commander: That’s an order, Captain. You’re dismissed.


(The tension in the room is palpable as the Commander’s voice cuts through the air. Ed places a hand on your shoulder, steering you toward the door.)


Ed: Let’s go, Jun. We’ll find a way to…


(Once in the corridor, you stop and turn to Ed.)


You: Why didn’t you say something? You know he’s hiding it.


Ed: Not here. Too many ears…


(You catch on, nodding slightly as you scan the corridor, realizing Ed’s caution.)


Ed: (thoughtfully) Raf... what’s in your mind?


(Posted on Threads on 30.10.2024)


(→ Continue to The Pursuit (Part 1))


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